I've had a quick look through, you might want to take your name address and phone number off it, as well as the customers and post it again. A few comments:
Extent: I'd say "consumer unit" not fuse board, and maybe say "additional" smoke alarm circuit to clarify that's the addition.
Section 3.1 - very common mistake, RCD for fault protection should not be ticked on a TN system assuming all Zs values are within limits. ADS is providing fault protection, the RCBO's are providing additional protection.
Is the wiring all new colours? The IR results suggest older wiring, just wondered if it does need two colours sticker which you have as N/A in section 7.10
Add the serial number of your tester on page 5 in the finished version, so it can be proved it was within calibration if required.
The Zs at DB at top of page 5 should presumably be 0.2 not 20 ohms
The Zs of circuit 6 is significantly less than the R1+R2....which looks a little bit interesting. Any bonding or parallel paths you are aware of?
Circuit 7 the same to a lesser extent. (I'm wondering if there is some cpc link between 6 and 7 on the stairs lighting....random possible cause)
I don't like that the RCD column on that form doesn't specify whether x1 or x5 trip current.
Sorry for bit of a list! I haven't listed the many things you got right so don't be discouraged!
EDIT - what did you have in mind for section 6.1, class II equipment?